Fatalis

ok so not that many people tag if i act emo sad... anyway I'm now gonna use my blog to practise my compos please feed back on them please:

The night was still, there was an eerie silence. The valley was lit by nothing but moon light, mountains loomed ominously in the distance.
"Are you sure we should do this?"
"Why not? Imagine the glory if we succeed. Besides can't you keep quite for a moment Tim? I'm trying to concentrate here"
"But we could DIE Louis."
"Arg. I didn't tell you to come along you volunteered now if you don't shut up i won't be able to complete the trap and we WILL die."
"But.."
"Either shut up or go home!"
Timothy walked of frustrated wishing that he never volunteered for this. He considered trying to convince Cheryl of the folly of this trip but decided not, knowing that she would be even more frustrated than Louis.Sighing he lay down on the grass star gazing for awhile until he heard Cheryl call for him knowing better than to ignore her, he went over to her.
"Tim get me a drink from the supplies"
"But.."
"But what?"
"Nothing"
Timothy stormed frustratedly all the way back to where they left the supplies. He wished that he could argue back but he knew he would lose from his past experiences. So he just did what he was told.Whem Tim got back from the supplies, he passed the bottle to Cheryl and she took it with out a word and took a deep gulp from it.
"Ah..You know Tim.."
"Whoop..Whoop"
Cheryl froze mid sentence as the heard that sound.All three hunters turned towards the same direction. Tim saw a small figure above the mountains coming closer by the second.
"It's here",said Tim with a tremble in his voice.
All three hunters ran behind this large rock.
"Remember the plan?",whispered Louis.
"Of course", replied Cheryl. Timothy sat there without a word more nervous than he had ever been. Louis took a peek around the side of the rock.
"It's almost here"
Timothy sat there shaking in fear. Irritated, Louis said, "look Timothy it's too late to back out now and if you keep feeling so scared you'll never be able to fight it now take the rope and pull only when i tell you to. Got it?"
A little more assured timothy stopped trembling. Suddenly the floor shook and a loud thud could be heard, followed by a ear splitting roar. Fatalis, the black dragon had landed.
Cheryl grinned and pulled out an arrow. Timothy held the rope with a grim determination.
"It's time, get ready", said Louis and he leapt over the rock and charged towards Fatalis